Title: Sanctuary of the Shadow {Elemental Emergence #1}
Author: Aurora Ascher
Published: 9th January 2024, Bantam
Status: Read January 2024 courtesy Penguin Australia
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My Thoughts:
Sanctuary of the Shadow is the first book in a planned trilogy by Aurora Ascher, a ‘romantasy’ featuring love and magic.
Harrow is the last of her kind, an Elemental seer whose source of power is The Water. She has spent her life in hiding, pretending to be human, afforded the protection of the Enchanter Salizar and his traveling ‘Incredible Elemental Circus’. When dreams of fire and shadows begin to disturb Harrow’s sleep they lead her to the circus’s newest attraction, a dangerous creature thought to be a myth. Raith has no memory of who he is, not his name or his purpose, but Harrow is certain he is her destiny, and she will risk everything to set him free.
I won’t reveal why Harrow and Raith should in fact stay far away from each other, but there is a good reason, just not one either remember. Yet the two are drawn to one other, also it turns out for a good reason. I’m not that keen on the insta-love situation generally but at least it makes sense within the context of the story. It does cause some pacing issues though, especially as they tumble into bed before they’ve had much of a conversation.
There are some really promising elements to this story with the magical world Ascher has created which includes warring sister queens, magic welders, and animal hybrids. Harrow was just ten when her clan was massacred by one of Queen Furie’s legendary assassins, ephemeral creatures made of shadows and fire, her escape from their fate inexplicable. In Harrow’s present, the queens, of whom there are five each representing an Element, have all but withdrawn from the world, the population of their elemental subjects having been devastated as a result of their infighting. Often despised by humans, the circus offers stateless Elementals safety and security. I thought it was a shame that more was not made of the circus spectacle, we get a glimpse of the performances of Harrow’s best friend, Malaikah, a black panther Hybrid who performs on the high wire, but not much else.
While I was interested in elements of Ascher’s imagined world, and some of her characters, unfortunately I was disappointed by the execution of the novel. Even though Sanctuary of the Shadow is 400 pages long, it feels like the editing process was too brutal, stunting both the worldbuilding and the romance. The writing is also disappointing. Despite the explicit sex scenes there is a lack of maturity, and little finesse or lyricism.
While Sanctuary of the Shadow didn’t enchant me in the way I hoped, there is potential here I hope it might be better realised in the second book since the basics of the worldbuilding has been established and the focus will be on another couple.
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